Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Jun 24, 2003.
this is so beautifully scribed..marvelous...very nice
so tonight from above
i swoop u in love
and take u in flyte
dis very night
and sho u the true warmth
of love from above
let u feel the caressness
and all the gentleness
tonight coz dis was beautiful write.
Thanks for all the luv Bluewater and Serenti.
Rich, your flow is so easy, thanks for dropping me a few lines. Much luv
****...that is really sad and beautiful at the same time
Khasm, coming from you "an ultimate writer/poet" it's quite humbling. Thanks so much for stopping by!
this is so beautifully writtin
nice flow it was very easy
You wrote this so well, I could just feel the heart aching...wow...
Mzblkangel...Much love for bringing this back...Peace & Blessings Sister
Watzinaname...the heart was aching, broken and torn...when I wrote this...
but I've come a long way...recovery was slow as mollasses but I'm all
taped and glued back together now, lol...Thanks for the love sister!
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