Black Poetry : The Sacrifice.......part 1 (an emotional mind trip)

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She speaks foul
    like I hit ball the wrong....
    all the while,
    we twist and turn yet I know we,
    sing the same song....
    Its crayzie but we're only human...
    containing emotions-- that are so new to us...
    all because we played devotion out
    devotion wasn't fulfilled this time around,
    and my devotion was type ferocious....

    Always looking at her face like clockwork,
    loving the smile......
    and her eyes made me realize,
    she the dime i want...NOW....

    She the dime that brought in my seed....
    to this world i beleive....
    is too cold for me to breathe....for me to ease...
    her pain would be like easing mine.....
    May 28- the date she looked into my eyes....
    she 's the dime.......
    My little girl--she's fine!.....
    moving her little feet in excellent health
    i never forgot that day....
    never forgot the words i say....moving in stealth...
    down these stairs i escalate my mind to pray...
    "most people are too rich and start abusing they wealth....
    but GOD,you just made me rich,without the greenery....
    you made me rich in my heart....
    you made me rich in my mind......
    you made me see from the start...
    i guess i chose not to be blind....

    i guess i chose not to be overcome-by the scenery.....


    and you will never know what she means to me....

    so breathe easy....i know you brought her in too....
    but i ain't no fool.....
    i aint the type to just move....and be out......

    you see...I'm about the warmth of my fam....
    you're my woman...play your role...i'll play mine
    and we could make it all fine........

    all i ask is that you keep it real with me
    and i'll keep it real with you......hopefully.........

    (to be contined....)
     
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    Great to see ya back, LURK. I'm diggin on this piece right here.
     
  3. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx gempis.......noooooooo doubt.......................
    this 4 my peeps who could relate.....if not...feel me.......

    one!
     
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    oh i love this...
    sure love and emotions flowin...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin every lick of dis scribe .....bringing it like no other
     
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    I know what u mean. Just play your part and I'll play mine, it takes two to raise a child. Smooches @ ya Lurk

    The Dreamer
     
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    Its always nice to hear a brotha dedicating himself to stay true to his child promising her the love she deserves.
     
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    thanx guys for tha love....as always it is apreciated........
    partt 2 next week...ya heard!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    i hope to be
    dope as thee
    ya poetic vibe on dis piece
    is straight lovely
    ay yo b
    part 2 i'm try'n to see

    tight
    peace
    khasm
     
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