Black Poetry : The Sacrifice.......part 1 (an emotional mind trip)

LURK

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She speaks foul
like I hit ball the wrong....
all the while,
we twist and turn yet I know we,
sing the same song....
Its crayzie but we're only human...
containing emotions-- that are so new to us...
all because we played devotion out
devotion wasn't fulfilled this time around,
and my devotion was type ferocious....

Always looking at her face like clockwork,
loving the smile......
and her eyes made me realize,
she the dime i want...NOW....

She the dime that brought in my seed....
to this world i beleive....
is too cold for me to breathe....for me to ease...
her pain would be like easing mine.....
May 28- the date she looked into my eyes....
she 's the dime.......
My little girl--she's fine!.....
moving her little feet in excellent health
i never forgot that day....
never forgot the words i say....moving in stealth...
down these stairs i escalate my mind to pray...
"most people are too rich and start abusing they wealth....
but GOD,you just made me rich,without the greenery....
you made me rich in my heart....
you made me rich in my mind......
you made me see from the start...
i guess i chose not to be blind....

i guess i chose not to be overcome-by the scenery.....


and you will never know what she means to me....

so breathe easy....i know you brought her in too....
but i ain't no fool.....
i aint the type to just move....and be out......

you see...I'm about the warmth of my fam....
you're my woman...play your role...i'll play mine
and we could make it all fine........

all i ask is that you keep it real with me
and i'll keep it real with you......hopefully.........

(to be contined....)
 

LURK

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thanx gempis.......noooooooo doubt.......................
this 4 my peeps who could relate.....if not...feel me.......

one!
 

$$RICH$$

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