Black Poetry : The Sacred Chance

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rasheed, Jan 13, 2004.

  1. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Look at the physical earth
    Then at your physical self
    As much of them as you can see
    Then contemplate the universe
    Physically, mentally and spiritually
    There are such similarities in the Great and Small
    Master Micro and Macro opens up unto you
    Know self and know that which surrounds
    Unto you is your own soul
    Given as a sacred trust
    To keep to learn to grow and advance
    This is the sacred chance
    To reach to the potentials placed within your being
    To reach the Heavens and mount up to the King
    To outstrip the despicable the low and debasing mess
    To kiss the everlasting eternal success

     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CLAP!CLAP! AND TWO SNAPS!

    This was on point and I loved it!
    Do you thang Poet!
    Flow what ya know and leave some love when ya go!

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE! :huh: :huh:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very very nicely done dis was awesome
     
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    Once again...

    I completely dig what you're workin' out of, brother.

    Keep it comin' cuz your words are like smellin' salts.
     
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    To outstrip the despicable the low and debasing mess
    To kiss the everlasting eternal success - rasheed

    Touched, by an angel's vernacular.
     
  6. Virgil

    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was nice. Definitely worth peeping.
     
  7. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was sooo deep...i had to read it twice. much love to you...this was a sacred piece of work.
     
  8. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    msluciousb, RICH, PositiveMindset, 1poetsought, Virgil , true love

    Thank you all for your positive and inspiring words and the way that you embraced these words. :grouphug:

    Peace and Blessings
     
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