Black Poetry : The Rythm

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Apr 4, 2006.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The rhythm of the city beats quickly and steady
    Like the human pulse beats pushing the life’s
    Blood through the veins to the heart beating
    Like the drums of the Sahara constant and true
    Beating out the story told long ago to the generations
    by the young African princes. The rhythm of the night whisks
    by cool and easy like a warm breeze of the water of the beaches
    of the islands of Jamaica breezy and salty and always inviting.
    The rhythm of life not steady or easy sometimes choppy and rocky like
    The waves of the ocean in the midst of the storm. The rhythm of the voice
    That quiets the raging waters quietly quickly “Peace Be still”
    The Rhythm
    The Rhythm
    The Rhythm.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i can feel the thump the rhythm of it's beat
    keep flowing as i do this rain dance..........
     
  3. Passionfruit005

    Passionfruit005 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well done, this joint is very nice,
    holla back Passion
     
  4. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ill drop sis. love your voice in this.
     
  5. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You say much for all the luv you guys.
    Defiant, Passion glad you enjoyed and felt the rythm
    $$Rich $$ dance on sweetie.
    Smooches
     
  6. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was feelin yo flo
    so flo on poet


    blackluv and bp
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    luv the flo sis keep them flo's coming.:welldone:
     
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