Black Poetry : The Rush

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  1. Harry Hyman

    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Rush


    I was caught in an orgasmic rush of Lust
    that burns up souls into ashened dust.
    Being gripped by its current now plummeting within
    makes blood feel like velvet of some Mortal Sin.
    Flipping the images in my mind like pages,
    it fired nerve endings with synaptic rages,
    shortening each breath 'til there was hardly none
    Oh my God! I just realized I was having fun !

    Veins expanded for blood in and out.
    Nostrils flared for the oxygen drought.
    My pores burst open to release the sweat
    that would cool the body's pulsing jets.
    My Temperature felt to be one hundred and seven
    where convulsions occur enroute to Love Heaven.
    I was spellbound caught in this majestic rapture
    that all men and women must yield to capture.

    Being caught just once is all that's needed
    to prime this yearning with a need to feed it.
    And this primal Urge of sacred distinction
    is all keeping Man from the edge of extinction.
    The arc of Passion swings far and wide
    but bends towards Peace when its fire subsides.
    But I'd walk hot coals of Hell in dust
    for one more orgasmic rush of Lust.

    HH​
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lustful rush of orgasmic man this here took me up and had my mind floating
    str8 awesome brutha whewwwwww !!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The rush that keeps one longing for its return. I enjoyed the urgency felt in this descriptive romp. Flow on.
     
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    the beat goes on bruh !
     
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    this was a very OUTSTANDING!
     
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    Really enjoyed this one.
    You kept it light.
    The 'sin' seems so good...:D

    moham
     
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