Black Poetry : the ruler's hand

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i started typingf and i came up with this

    to celebrate this week
    i speak


    The ruler’s hand

    Yes!!!!!!!!

    Cut toes
    Like roots
    Swoop…it all came to a rush
    Watching thru spectacles, how spectators hush
    And try to relate to this verb……..
    Word!!!

    To the peaks of the mountains or hate
    Debate on who creates the stakes that killed Jane’s date
    When the date vanishes, what’s left in the moonlight whisper?

    We like angel, but who buff’s the “good”
    Misunderstood where the agents lie, they ain’t the hood
    I watch the Gov. lock a glove on juice and showed the world a bronc
    When u interrupts they hood

    The juice was then set free by god’s grace
    Along with a poet’s line from Coch
    King we still remember the block
    But some forgot, and that’s why I got a repeat myself

    When he got beat by batons
    Somebody was beating Juan
    Across the border
    And a 12 year was convicted by the judge’s order

    He was only a kid, they gave him life
    Ironic how they say they gave u life
    I wonder what he thinks felt, can I transport transparently
    Into the mind of a mind of his parent but it’s so apparent

    That the gnat is the eye of the back
    That backs the spine that is now a spline
    Of what it onced define
    What was his is still left in his room with the dust lines

    On the floor, he probably can’t snore from the fights
    Of life as soldier get bombed by people who feel they have life
    And no flight can’t escape rape, no flight can’t escape fate
    U can’t end hate, cuz if u awake, u can’t end hate

    But this hate exist can only in metapersperctive
    Who gives directives on those who barely speak with playful objectives?
    Reflections on spouses who taught hate in houses
    But why…..r we quiet as mousse

    We see the light, run for the dark
    We know the covenant’s ark, still we drift apart
    As a people who throw arrows and dart
    At each other hearts
    The source and the solution is where it starts

    Could you hold hands with another man
    If u really a brother an
    And u love ann
    And your mother an
    Then u can
    Too
    Know the beauty of the forest
    Toucan Sam
    Even when Uncle Sam
    Constructs plan
    U don’t see the intelligence behind his hand
    His right hand man
    Don’t see scars on your right hand
    They just man
    Fore we can
    Build a dam
    Against the cam
    That shoots vivid lacerations of the world’s diaphragm
    But we must demand
    And withstand
    The ruler’s hand

    Question is: who’s the ruler… you, gods, idols, or man….
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ah yes
    this is wonderful ...feeding the mind...with stand the ruler hands...nice drop indeed..deep ..very
    flow it poet of the week
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  3. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thespokesman,
    Congrats on POTW
    enjoying the message and the flow.

    "But we must demand
    And withstand
    The ruler’s hand

    Question is: who’s the ruler… you, gods, idols, or man…. "

    Challenging, "Think, because you are a Thinker"

    Peace an Blessings
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful scribe poet love da flow
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now i likes this
    tight drop
    speak on.....
    Angel
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To whom do we answer to? Serious vibe.
     
  7. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love
    i appreciate it a lot
     
  8. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    the answer is you...
    but that depends on who you are talking to...

    tyte piece man...
    one love
    khasm
     
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