Black Poetry : THE ROSE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    She was divine
    she pose as rose
    her beauty
    of color
    gleam my soul
    she unfold
    by day in the
    sun light
    blooming to my
    dear heart
    her sweet aroma
    take me in waves
    i drif into a zone
    where love roam
    her thorns never
    pluck me but caress
    in my handz
    the rose of warmth
    sweet passion made
    ruby red soft white
    even pink for my
    delight she catch
    rain drops the falls
    da well of my eyez
    and dance in da wind
    i need not to pluck her
    to know of dis love
    i'll just hold her close
    like hand n' glove to
    my beating heart :heart:
    she my Dyamond Rose
    forever so cuddle
    sweet wit cares her
    gentle embrace i truely
    bare into starz :spinstar: above
    she have this sparkle
    she is the ROSE @}-}->---
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww this was love
    heartfelt and emotions jus a flowing
    another on da wall.....

    imma need them
    4 walls you got now...:lol:

    this was tight
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was really romantic, the image of the rose in so many colors and depths of emotion, just like a breath of fresh air.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yeah i have four walls free thanks angel it nothing like a rose to ya heart

    watz thankz sistah u know a rose is a rose and mild windz make it sweet
     
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    This is so sweet!
    You even created
    the image of the
    rose at the end.
    It adds the perfect
    finishing touch!
    You go on Mr.Rich!
    You da MAN!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u sistah Queen
    to me every woman Queen
    is a ROSE that i love dearly
    so to u here your very own ROSE @}-}-)----
    long steam that is !
     
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