Black Poetry : the rocks and woes

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  1. whisper

    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Rocks and Woes

    there were five white rocks
    and the first one teased
    you can have me baby, i am free

    there were four white rocks
    and the second one said
    now i"m all inside your head

    there were three white rocks
    and the third one bragged
    i got your womens ring,
    your baby's milk and all your cash

    there were two white rocks
    and the fourth one yelled
    i'm know i 'm good cause you're in jail

    there was one white rock
    and the fifth one laughed
    man, don't you know , you've been had

    but the six white rock never made a sound....
    he was buried...six feet down
    in the ground

    "R.I.P. stupid"






    part one of" mother goose in the hood"
     
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    tight poem
    loving your lesson
    in this flow
    indeed it is
    wonderful
    Peace
     
  3. gempis

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    whisper I love this! the point is made.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well heard da class is in da mix
    dis was tyte scribing here
     
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    this was tight....
    and interstin...
     
  6. whisper

    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am so glad i founed this site cause when i did i founed a family of love
    thanks so much


    whisper
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome, my friend. :wave:
     
  8. whisper

    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i appreciate that Olakuoto. thanks very much
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree wit Cindy...if this is a WHISPER then I dont know if I can handle the shout lol :)
     
  10. whisper

    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey cindy, thanks , okay you are right it wasn't a whisper(smile)
     
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