Black Poetry : The Rise of A Queen

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nita, Dec 20, 2005.

  1. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have not written poetry in a while but sometimes in certain situations you have to do what your heart tells you to do.


    The Rise of a Queen
    Gone to take to take her heavenly place
    From my eyes tears fall
    and moisten my face

    Unlike a father, sister, or brother
    Even before birth, I knew you mother
    Sheltering me inside your womb
    Protecting me like treasures in a tomb

    Always a loving mother
    And Always my best friend
    We will surly miss you mother
    Tho you're gone
    We'll meet again

    I wish you could have lived forever
    But somehow that wouldn't be right
    For this world has many troubles
    and God needs you back home
    for HIS delight.

    Now your wings you have earned
    And in Heaven you can fly free
    Watching us from above
    Until we reunite eternally

    So from my face, the tears may fall
    As rivers of Love flow from my eyes
    And your soul is lifted on
    Heaven Bound as our Queen rise.


    :heart:We Love you Queen Tswana :heart:
     
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    Definately a fine tribute to A most deserving and priceless Queen, loved the essence of this flow...so beautiful, thanks for this piece, blessings... D.S.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was divine and surely priceless
    a jewel of essence of beauty u sprayed
    Nita this was outstanding when u come u comes correct!
     
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    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nita, it's 1:57am here in Nebraska, by the way, I'm Nabraska, an old poet who drops in from time to time....but your piece hit me one many different levels....I lost my father to cancer this year 10.7.05, and my sister is currently in the livingroom with her daughter (mother/daughter connection)...but like I said, this piece hit me on several different levels, thank you for sharing, your words have meant more than what u can know....THANK YOU
     
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    this was so beautiful nita keep up the good work. flow on poet.:spinstar:
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a beautiful tribute, Nita...Just know that I love you too, Queentswana...
     
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    The rise of a King- peace to my father who met his God in 7/2/04.

    Nita, love the piece and much love 2 u.
     
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    This was beautiful beyond words Nita. And yes we do love sister queent, I'm sure this will touch her heart.
     
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    you got it so use it....

    Wow sistah!!!!! This is the type of talent that you need to relaese into the world to keep the world up and not just cheer the world up!!!! I personally know your talent for that and I will not let it lay at rest another day!!!! Keep me rising with the words of power that you speak! When I say me I mean the thousands that will read the blessings that you write. Thank you angel!!!!
     
  10. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (((((((HUGS)))))))

    Thank you family, your kind and encouraging words truly touched my heart.

    :heart:
     
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