Black Poetry : The Ride

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by AACOOLDRE, Dec 21, 2005.

  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Road Trip

    In a 1974 Cadillac

    I wanna take U on a trip
    So get your self ready for this dip
    All you need is a brush for your teeth
    And a brush for your hair
    Ride with some Southern Comfort
    Maybe even elope cuz our friends don’t care
    If it happens it happens
    I’m only expecting love in the air
    Chauffeured on the highway is kind of neat
    Getting our feels on in the back seat
    Playing Superfly on the old 8 track
    Fanaticizing the dreams of The Mack
    Don’t pull back the drop top
    Until the rain stops the sperm drops
    They all just a falling on her diamond spot
    Our ride went so so swell
    From Michigan into the ATL
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now y'all was riding hard low and tyte....
     
  3. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece is real down to earth to me, very comforting and cool to read.
     
  4. nevar

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    wow this was nice can i get a ride hahaha!!!!!!!! flow on poet.:nuts: :star:
     
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    Hell if Michigan to ATL do all that
    I wonder if I go from Chicago to ATL
    Man I need a map
    Hott flow poet Much love
     
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