Black Poetry : The rhythm of my pen

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dream Weaver, Jul 31, 2003.

  1. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last night
    Sleep again refused to entertain my mentals
    trying my best to ignore the pulse
    the steady beat that’s not part of my physicality
    yet drums dully
    into my quiescent existence
    till forsaken parts of ‘the me’
    awakens reluctantly
    reactions’ chains detonate
    and verbal blasts resonate
    against the walls of my mind
    and forcefully my ink stained
    carpel’d fingers finds its mate
    my verbal wand
    and the cadence jumps forth
    and manifests on paper in azure hieroglyph
    that only the prosaic comprehends
    quite spent when the last drip drops
    I fall into poetic slumber
    glowing in the rhythm of my pen…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful flow ...................the pen is bad !
     
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    Man, that was dope. Love the bangin' ending. :D
     
  4. omoboladapoet

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    i wrote something like this before......nice ending
     
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    Hi DreamWeaver, :wave:

    Wonderful flow!! Beautiful ending. I enjoyed it very much!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    That jazzy wand of yours, so progressive, so true!
     
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    wow! i like this alot!
     
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    hey dreamweaver
    feeling that rhythm
    this is great
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    Dream, this piece took the soul on a mental flow!

    Unique and Original piece! Very well scribed.
     
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    :toast: i liked this one. it was hot
     
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