Black Poetry : ~*The Rhythm of Love*~ ((A PlayWitItPimp05 and Khasm13 Collaboration))

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  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bump, bump, bump

    is the fierce pounds of my heart sounds in surround

    cause whenever our eyes meet

    my feet are lifted off the ground

    floating on clouds filled with your countenance

    i've been completely blessed by your presence

    with you i have not felt the bitter pain of sufferance

    cause our supreme love is a true monument

    a micro example of how the world should be

    with me you communicate freely and openly

    like the wind whispers to the leaves of a maple tree

    so easily with the touch of your hand

    you take me out of this chaotic city

    and wisp me away to the fertile soil of the motherland

    and instantly i forget about father time's running sand

    far from bland your soul is so exquisite

    you've cast a spell on me

    similar to an archmage or a wizard

    and this is something i never want to change

    cause no one has ever touched me as you have

    and gotten inside of my heart's wall range

    each time with you it wails

    bump, bump, bump

    isn't that strange?


    Khasm



    thump, thump, thump....
    the sound that my heart indulges in
    every time you gracefully caress my innermost
    desire and emotion bursting with devotion
    for a love that you evoke within my subconscious...
    thump, thump, thump....
    the sounds of our lovemaking
    when you penetrate my three divinities
    physically, spiritually, and mentally,
    wondering what it is that you've done to me
    that has me drunk off of your natural beauty
    you give me wonderfully somnolent nights
    and wonderfully energized days
    knowing this love can never fade away
    knowing this love puts the SOUL in soul mate
    thump, thump, thump...
    the sounds of my heart strings being constantly tugged
    melodically matches with the vibration of harp strings
    wondering how i could have fallen into the
    surrealism of our whole ordeal
    with a simple phone call and an instant appeal
    the attraction has broken into something more real
    something which pervades our innermost privacies
    unable to hold back anything that relates to our affinities
    the beauty of it blows back and forth in our face
    and a tear of joy rolls down as we both embrace
    a real love, that stares us right in the face....
    thump, thump, thump....
    lulls us to sweet dreams in innermost space
    which no other human being can penetrate
    our souls flow together like two streams converging
    can you feel the charm of realism emerging...
    dancing to melody of the connection of our hearts...
    and slowly we fade into
    thump thump thump....

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Encore.......Encore..........Encore:toast:

    Two of my favorite poets "together on the page"

    This was so emotive and "Khasm" you really blew me away...wow!:spinstar: Your so versatile.

    This was beautiful......both of you.....got my heart going
    thump, thump, thump!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all smack down dis was awesome y'all took it all da way there
     
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    Y'all took me there and I don't wanna leave.
    That was so slickk.
     
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    you both collab so well:)....i was like..****....im smiling reaslly hard cuz i liked this one soo much :toast:
     
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    Thump, Thump, Thump? Bump, Bump, Bump? Aw man, I liked this. The Rhythum of Love, it was awesome. This get a "10" with me. Maaaaaan, that was ill, son. Loving ya'll flow
     
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    when you penetrate my three divinities
    physically, spiritually, and mentally,

    awww hell....put it down...you two flow well!
     
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    This was so [email protected] hot :) only the best could do this...
    Playwitit & Khasm = Truly beautiful :)
     
  9. PlayWitItPimp05

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    thank you fam!! We love you guys!! :luvv:

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    yes yes yes
    this was so :hot:
    wow...the fever
    of this collab
    is wonderful
    loving it up
    this is so devine
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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