Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Return Consequence

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Boundaries invaded , steppin stone
    consequence rise back to roam
    fragments unto da power strong
    billions of years standing along

    Blasted on the depth of night
    misguided deeper from da light
    da hour glass eyes set on sight
    from the mazing quence of fright

    set sail upon da peer of fear
    my face now drop alonely tear
    where my cares sit to the land
    and da labor from these handz
    the greater suffering yet loom
    hidden beyond da sour cocoon

    Mask on life's known existence
    come da deeper consequence
    abundantly i struggle again
    and face da poverty within
    from the humankinds great sin
    i may see a million tomorrows
    but today i visit consequence sorrow

    Straight and narrow
    wit eyes on da sparrow
    i realized da footprint pathyway
    echos from a distant explode
    and how hearts become cold
    in da song of fowl ever so bold
    i drop my head and soul in a fold
    these boundaries of ancient existence
    where consequence now stroll............ :bye:
    :danger: :bomb: :danger: :bomb: :danger: :bomb: :danger: :bomb: :danger:

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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Will we forever walk in the shadow of what has happened before, or will we be able to get past it? May be hard to see it, but with God's help anything is possible. I could feel the sorrow in this piece, brotha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank you watz for feeling the depth of sorrow that looms .
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    as it returns ..........consequence
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i love the title rich...and also the poem (you know me by now a little esoteric pulls me right on in)
    what we do we gotta pay the consequence...
    the good thing is ... we learn from it...
    lflow on my brother... flow...with conscience in that conseqence stroll
     
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    so true deepy thankz for the visit and support happy the title grasp u ......
     
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