Black Poetry : The Rest of My Life

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  1. Realguyjeff

    Realguyjeff Active Member MEMBER

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    The Rest Of My Life

    I couldn’t find myself with eyes gouged out by rain drops.

    So I destroyed myself daily with innovation, and muscle striations

    I found rest in virtues fused in black skin and a nice smile who defined me daily by becoming one.

    Freed from exhaustion by finding me in us,

    I found the rest of my life.
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a very very nice flow,keep um comin.
     
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    Real...........this is a "MASTERPIECE"........the depth, emotion,...simply Incredible. More, More...Encore!

    (I found rest in virtues fused in black skin and a nice smile who defined me daily by becoming one.) this is the ultimate line.

    Loving it...Angelic
     
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    Hey real
    this is great
    wonderful
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey real
    this is great
    wonderful
    quote"I found the rest of my life."
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed u did
    the reality of truth spoken within the depth of dis flow
    tyte scribe
     
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    there is no happier moment is there? :)
    keep em comin'
    :)
     
  8. Realguyjeff

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    Well I thank all those who took the time to think with me and comment on the experience. I look forward to doing this again for sure.
     
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