Black Poetry : THE REPLY : A poem by Tdogg

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  1. tdogg

    tdogg Active Member MEMBER

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    THE REPLY

    Gently she leans forward and whispers softly
    her voice tenderly questions my heart
    I cannot know the answer so soon
    my mind seems to speak in riddles
    unable to see blindly I fumble
    the words bursting forth
    but not to be spoken
    slowly I exhale as drops of water
    dance upon the floor....

    "With a heart pure innocence as a dove
    I am consumed with passion.
    The song of desire has risen in my soul,
    with every taste I purge from your lips.
    Burning fantasys you have ignited the flames
    imprisoned in my mind"

    Confession, this my love would be my reply.
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The shot heard around the world; short, sweet and to the point!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like your work
    interesting and deep
     
  4. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey hey :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
    this was hot my brotha look forward to more :)
     
  5. the_story

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    welcome T, im lovin this reply your poetry is off the HOOK!!!
    HOPE U LIKE UR STAY HERE!!!:wave: :wave: :wave:
    much love,
    -story
     
  6. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome...:hot: I hope we can get some more
     
  7. tdogg

    tdogg Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for all feedback and support it is very important to me how people read and recieve message conveyed if it is clear and relative, then I feel work is not in vain. Thank you once again!
    Signed Tdogg.
     
  8. peppachatni

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    Wow!
    sorry, but that's all I could say.
    Lost for words.
    The end was a flame itself.
     
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