Black Poetry : The reEvolution of ME

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NDeep, Sep 22, 2003.

  1. NDeep

    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Changing faces and replacing
    New notions and re-innovating
    The inevitable growing I’m going through
    The reEvolution of Me

    Problem solving and troubleshooting
    Performing maintenance and maintaining
    Going through a thorough shaking
    The reEvolution of Me

    Switching bad attitudes with good Re-inventing my demeanor and reclaiming
    Victory over Despair
    The reEvolution of Me

    Writing and Flowing
    Instead of fighting and hating
    Mind controlling and tongue bitting
    The reEvolution of Me

    Releasing my emotions and cares on paper
    While soul searching for deeper meanings
    Looking for poetic moments in everyday living
    The reEvolution of Me

    Evolving spirits and spring
    Cleaning lies and repairing
    Certain verities within myself
    The reEvolution of Me

    Tossing and then turning
    Thinking about the rebirthing
    While discovering the identity of N Deep
    The reEvolution of Me
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! this was very very nicely done
    it speaks clear.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes rich is so right
    nice flow
     
  4. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a great read :)
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  6. Khasm13

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    this was tyte as speedos
    on fat peoples
    peace
    khasm