Black Poetry : The Rebirth pt 6...{It's for real this time}

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  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know it’s been a while,
    But I had to take some time,
    To see if I can capture this feeling,
    Into a compact rhyme.
    I didn’t want to rush my words this time,
    Only to have the feeling erased,
    And then my words emulate,
    When I hit the backspace…

    Wasted pieces, worthless speeches,
    Never brought off of the screen.
    They remain week after week,
    Because I’m afraid to wipe my ‘folder’ clean.

    But it’s a new beginning,
    The rebirth of my self worth,
    Because of you ‘baby’.

    Turning my sadness into gladness,
    And me, learning that the last,
    Was not the end.
    There are better lovers…
    Better friends…

    As I am allowed to draw from the screen,
    To release to you what my words mean,
    You pull out of me…the unseen.

    It's a new style, new direction,
    Created from fresh affection,
    Insinuated by your daily calls,
    ‘Just to check up’,
    Your concern when I hit a wall,
    That has me ‘wrecked up’.
    You want to take care of me,
    Thus my name tenderly ‘Baby’…

    It’s a new beginning,
    The rebirth of my self worth,
    Because of you.


    As we continue to conceive,
    I think it's safe to believe,
    That this one...is unable,
    To be...aborted
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely it will be ............
    this was felt and to the heart
    indeed this time no stopping
    what is and to be

    very well expressed Chastity
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like a love of a lifetime. This read so genuinely poet, nice to read something new from you.
     
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