Black Poetry : The Reason

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by spicybrown, Aug 14, 2006.

  1. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My dearest beloved Afrikan ​
    King
    the reason I arise in the morn' and want to
    sing
    a psalm to motivate you for your daily
    endeavors
    No one could ever take your place, you & I reign
    forever
    I know this wicked world is set up for your demise to maim and
    kill
    which is an incentive for me to "straighten up" and submit to your
    will
    For I know my place is to stand firm, next to, and not behind
    you
    to whisper in your ear and be your helpmeet; adhere to you like
    glue
    Afrikan man my first true love, the masculine of my
    reflection
    You've been down since the beginning of time, let's never lose our
    connection
    The spitting image of GOD ALMIGHTY, you're thorough and reign
    ~SUPREME~
    When the going gets rough, amidst stormy weather : Psst...I'm on ya
    team
     
  2. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl you reall nailed it. I might have to print this for the poetry wall. I wanted to flow back with you but instead I :bow: to a :terrific:
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    the words behind this poem are very sweet and endearing...
    spoken like a tru queen....great piece

    one love
    khasm
     
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    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:

    this is real fo real poetess!

    I'm sure all Afrikan Kings will feel good after reading this scribe.....

    peace
     
  5. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace and :thanks: for the loving responses...:hearts4:
    :bowdown:
    :picture:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Truely this was well done and felt
    u said it with essence like a break through
    go head spicy.........................................
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautifully written, I'm sure every Afrikan King is smiling with pride over this one.
     
  8. Omowale Jabali

    Omowale Jabali The Cosmic Journeyman PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Thank you for this masterpiece!

    :ilu:
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spicy:
    THIS WAS ALL THAT AND THEN SOME.
    BEUATIFULLY EXPRESSED.
    FLO ON...FLO ON...

    Much luv
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    teaming up

    to do battle against the world isn't a bad thing
    there is strength
    most people think they can do it on their own
    and they can, but true strength comes from unity

    love feeling the feeling of love in this piece
     
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