Black Poetry : the reason(s) i love you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Mar 31, 2001.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for you are to me moonlight of my inner sea
    consummating
    illuminating the inner me

    even the earth wonders
    at our motion of hearts
    in love's orbit..

    i love you for who you are
    and if you need a confirmation, then
    watch the stars glisten
    the moment i kiss you

    you give life to me as if you were
    the sustenance for my being
    as the sun is genial to the gardens
    so are you to me
    for God has sent you..

    i now can see that God is humble,
    loving and wise
    the moment i look in your brown eyes
    to be taken to an unchartered place in my heart
    you are to me His priceless art..

    and i love you more than all words can say
    and more than my heart could ever convey
    for until you, my love
    i never thought i could feel this way...

    i love you

    jehiah.
     
  2. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!

    That is true love! Thanks for the scribe. It was from the heart!
    One_Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    jh THATS REAL LOVE OF HEART AND SOUL
    KEEP LOVIN'
     
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    Every Time

    every time
    i enter to
    find a
    peace of mind

    i come across
    a path where
    love enters
    my mind

    every time

    u appear :heart:
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JEHIAH...

    sweet lil brother of mine...
    this was very... very... nice-- indeed!

    you just gettin' your romantic flow
    on up in hea!! :lol: ...keep 'em
    comin'... you know i'm a sucka for the
    romantic pieces...

    InfiniteLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  6. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!!!!
    That was BOMB... "illuminating the inner me"
    Dang,dang,dang!!! I love that.....
    takes you to another level ya know....

    8th!
     
  7. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    had to

    show some love here nice piece is this dedicated to someone cause they should be proud
     
  8. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh this is very sweet. You're going to make me cry!
    Desert Storm
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    these type poems are my rareties,
    and it doesn't take over 5 mins...

    anyway thanx all

    pd, thanx...
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *peep my versace shades*

    these type poems are my rareties,
    and it doesn't take over 5 mins...

    anyway thanx all

    pd, thanx...
     
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