Black Poetry : the realtionship game (realated to chess)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticwords, May 30, 2003.

  1. poeticwords

    poeticwords Member MEMBER

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    I thought you were tru
    you know...
    different from all the rest
    You told me you'd never hurt me
    you wouldn't cause that stress

    But It's cool man...
    I ain't mad at you
    I'm at myself
    ****, I knew I should've listened when momma told me
    "be careful Honey and always wear a vest"

    But it was you who told me
    dont trip ma u can put that to rest
    Im here now
    You know im better than the rest

    And like a fool in love
    I became a pawn in ya game of chess...

    Well, hey
    I was a rookie then...
    What you haven't heard?
    I enrolled me in game school since then...
    And guess what Slim?
    The game of chess is what I got my Masters in

    Awww, Baby
    whats the matter ? why your eyes get dim?
    I thought you'd be glad boo
    well whats the matter then?
    dont look mad now cause its your fault Slim
    you not only taught me how the play game
    you taught me how to play to win
     
  2. poeticwords

    poeticwords Member MEMBER

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    I related the dating game to chess because in order to win the game...you have to use the pieces placed before you to hold your ground and protect your king (heart). And in order to protect the king u must either make him a vest (blockade ) or use the pieces
    as your weapon to check your mate...u feel me...anyway i like destee so far...i lotta people inspire me here...this is my second post and i hope its better than the first...and i hope u will keep giving me feed back to help me grow...one love
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very niceley put poet I really enjoyed this one you are such a wondeful poet. :) thanks for blessins us with this piece. peace and blessins and keep flowin
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You didn't have to explain nothing...b/c I know where youre coming from!!!!!!! Beautiful second piece....They're both very well written
     
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    nice scribe...

    that's how it is nowdays
    your king has to be in a castle
    or get blazed
    by rouge rooks
    that will stample your queen
    with no second looks
    you have to position your k(nights)
    so you can strike
    true with might
    cause you might
    get run up on
    my massive pawns
    stomping through your lawns
    but after everything is said and done
    don't let the bishop
    try and kiss up
    cause on a sly angle
    he'll try and mess your bliss up

    keep scribing...i can tell you have a lot to say
    peace
    khasm
     
  6. poeticwords

    poeticwords Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the feedback...i appreciate it...look forward to more...peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true flow i feel ya dis da way it's played today
     
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