Black Poetry : The real world

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by iwannabe, Sep 10, 2005.

  1. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The real world

    THE REAL WORLD- doesn't care;
    If we are free.

    Because THE REAL WORLD- wasn't made;
    For you or me.

    THE REAL WORLD- wants to ensure that;
    We crumble and fall.

    In fact, THE REAL WORLD- would love for;
    Us to not succeed at all.

    THE REAL WORLD- is hard, and I for one feel;
    You can't survive it without strength of will.

    This is THE REAL WORLD- and we won't be happy ‘til
    We say ***** the REAL WORLD, and redefine what's real! ​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up !!!!!!

    I use the world
    not what is betrayed to be real
    but what i pose as reality i feel
    as i redefind it all from realization
    tyte drop i hear ya on da world
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What is supposed to real for all in this nation, is only real for a chosen few. Truthful scribe, powerfully posed.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I must say I feel every word you say its time to make the world ours and start the real that is true to mind and heart I love this one.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    iwannabe

    very nice drop poet. I love the rythm of your flow in this piece. Keep it coming.

    :thanks: for sharing with us...the Fam.

    :toast:
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    word to this drop

    i agree. nice poem
     
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    Very raw piece, good to see your think out the mudane trappings of everday life and what is fake.
     
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    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes.

    That´s what´s up.

    That was PC (poetically, and politcally correct).

    One.

    Ikoro
     
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