Black Poetry : The Reader

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Cindy, Aug 2, 2005.

  1. Cindy

    Cindy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Justice
    What of the justice
    Of imaginary miles that separate us now
    Fate
    Put love in the wind
    Like the seeds of a dandelion
    Fate knows not Justice
    We can only hope they meet
    Maybe someday
    Justice will marry Fate
    And we could all be happy
    Living happily after ever
    Until then
    We dream
    Touching fingertips in the fog
    Longing for a real hug
    And a kiss of truth in the warmth of imaginary lips
    The mind's breeze takes us to
    A spring day
    Picnic in the park
    Shooing ants away
    Playing hide and seek
    Chasing each other until out of breath
    Collapsing into laughter
    In a bright sunny way...
    Fate
    Brings on thunder...
    Spoiling the picnic
    Raining on mind's play
    But in truth
    Friends
    Can withstand much pain
    So you see, here we are
    Words
    Combining like crossword puzzles
    Entwined
    You the reader
    Kindred spirits
    Each knowing each others
    Loves
    And fears...
    If only Justice could marry Fate
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said if they could bond wow !
    nice flow cindy
     
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    cindy once again youve touched me.. flow on!
     
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    Loved the concept, and the peaceful easy style in which this flowed.
     
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    :toast:

    What a fabulous concept! 'LOVED IT!

    I love how you presented this!...Your language is so descriptive!...The imagery is vivid!







    And :birthday:
     
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    very nice and warming poem i really enjoyed reading this it took me in thank you for sharing...Angel
     
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