Black Poetry : The Reader Pt one

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  1. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My hand is out waiting for you to storm thru this computer screen
    and speak your words
    so that i may hear them
    i place myself below and beyond the brittle surface of your circumstances

    no i cant save you
    but my words make you better

    My blunt is lifted
    towards the confines of my lips
    this formula has kept me tamed and sane
    my poetry doesnt have the ability to rhyme
    life defines itself in these words

    L(l)O(i)V(f)E(e) in all that you do

    fall in love with the truth like i have fallen in love with
    you

    you

    This is to you
    the reader

    My eye and I
    My I and i
    My I and I
    My i and i




    My dreams are buried under the white house
    and my heart soars as if it was a bird flying away from its prey

    Now i lift my eyes to my survival

    eye and I
    i the poet
    to you the reader

    eye and I
    you the poet
    to me the reader

    I sit back and allow my brain waves to intercept
    just what you are trying to say

    I see

    and

    EYE feel all the fury of your weak emotions

    I must admit they have made you stronger
    Recognize the fact reader that you have withstood
    the storms that life brings with it


    And I Read You



    I and Eye


    ps .. No copy rights
    if you write then write
    but i want you to feel inspired to write
    i want you to feel the need to write
    no copy rights needed
    if you write
    then write;;
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u laid it out there so forth i read I 2 eye contact
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is a connection between the writer and the reader. The poet writes of someone's pain, someone's love, someone's purpose, and it's as though the reader wrote it. I enjoy your craft, poet.
     
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