Black Poetry : The Rapper

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Rapper

    I write this chapter to a tight rapper that flowed blindness
    And no kindness he was ill couldn’t fulfill destiny glowed mindless
    Stayed behind on rent didn’t pay compliment to the game
    Went all the time lame, cats felt his rhymes were forced and untamed
    So he concealed a true course of knowledge got divorced in college
    Now pay alimony to a phony girl that play around real garbage
    Caught her in bed with other soul brothers got his pride scuffed
    Nothing he done seem right got into extreme fights and stuff
    With scrubs and a few thugs grew up tuff with a crew ruff
    But he knew stuff about life things he learned were true enough
    Had to belly ish but like jellyfish stayed rotten at the bottom
    Needed acedemic preparation no limit to his desparation got him
    Far, made money in profession but lefted a funny impression
    On crowds, see his gangsta rap was pranksta crap no lesson
    Learned, had a desire for fame bought fire to the game
    A suspicious man with an ambitious plan left microphones tame
    But the power of nature when you tower many hate ya bad
    One night a cat with a gat had gunsight shot from a glock
    Ring out hit his non bullet proof vest chest left many in shock
    Ambushed and pushed fear in the wind as his career end sad

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaa!!! MADD RAPPER speaketh from da MC side
    tyte flow of sad maze
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this...
    like the flow of it....
    what a sad end...tight
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ AND mzblkangel yall made my day i was really trying o put some feeling into this one guess i succeeded for real thanks for the props yo
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so sad and deep...i loved it...much love for this one.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true love THANKS FOR THE PROPS FOR REAL GIRL
    Truest
     
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