Black Poetry : The Rain

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Oct 8, 2003.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Rain

    Prepare for attack the air is whack could be a hurricaine
    Rain of a plane but it Superman in a red cape he claim
    To be a dead fake in the game ok man back to the rain
    Hell when I walk in rain gets stalked lame by lightning
    Tame my writing with loud clouds but it was frightening
    This thug twist mud and drink Cris at the club be fighting
    Owner kick me out because of my sick clout and rap
    Anyway back to the rain and the Huricaine yap
    Rain is a higher order, its water falling from the sky
    Moisture on my paper appear from the vapor of the atmosphere
    Rain is a form of precipitation that could storm and rip a nation so I fear
    Spatter on glass it could shatter an *** or solve drought matters
    Fast, it drip drop from my head as Hip Hop is read my bladders
    Full of piss but can’t pull this rain off me, the dreads on my head scatters
    Now I’m a dumb fella with an umbrella don’t like wet the type that gets
    To your allergies, coughing and sneezing tissue softening and squeezing
    Your nostrils, must prevail strong even if hailstones fall on your home leaving
    Stains of rust but can’t complain or fuss the crops need the stuff
    This is thug rap but I got mud flaps on my truck but still duck enough
    Potholes, all the splashing could be crashing your bling rims

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very tight...much love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    drop it !
    drip drip drip !
    da rain of splash
    tyte scribe bruh MADD
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice:)
     
  6. angelicsage

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    Moisture on my paper appear from the vapor of the atmosphere
    Rain is a form of precipitation that could storm and rip a nation so I fear
    Spatter on glass it could shatter an *** or solve drought matters
    Fast, it drip drop from my head as Hip Hop

    and

    Stains of rust but can’t complain or fuss the crops need the stuff


    so many parts to this that I'm feeling...
     
  7. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks to all those that peeped and a very special thanks to those that responded to the rain for real
     
  8. Dough Jordan

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    seen better
     
  9. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    dough jordan....
    if you do not have something positive to say
    then say nothing at all...
    this is your last warning...
    whateva beef you and madrapper have
    take it someplace else...

    peace
    khasm
     
  10. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS TO ALL THOSE THAT PEEPED AND SPECIAL THANKS TO THOSE THAT RESPONDED
     
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