Black Poetry : The Queens of Destee - The For You Series - Pt. 4 (N2UrSoul)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I swear Nikki was your first
    name but when we met you said "that
    time when the sun rises, is named after me"

    I thought "**** maybe she is Nikki
    cause Nikki said she was Ego Tripping
    when she drank nectar with allah and
    the tears from her birth pain created
    the Nile"

    And now morning is synonymous to her
    name....maybe I'll call you

    Aurora
    or
    give you a full name

    "the appearance of firstlight in the morning"

    so I can listen to
    silence give way to sound
    and read you again
    on a new day...

    it just dawned on me
    that the morn has to go away
    with time just to return again
    in another revolution

    and I'm not really speaking but spinning
    along the axis of the earth
    to see you rise again
    and again.


    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb

    this show of love and affection is so beautiful to view. Im sure she is going to absolutely love it.



    *leaving kisses on ya mental*
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You sure know...

    the directions to get ya'
    into my mental.....
    and when you get there
    you know the right things
    to say, a mime for my
    mind ~ Blakverb's way ... Now this one's for YOU my sweet!
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    I read from some
    humbler poet
    whose songs
    gushed from
    his heart
    as showers
    from the
    clouds of summer
    or tears from eyelids
    that part
    You Are
    the impalpable mist
    ...The whole man
    that I seek ~
    YOU are the cause
    of the Sphinx
    ~voiceless
    ~baffled
    ~patient
    Blak Sphinx
    YOU were at
    the first of things
    and, YOU will be at the last
    the top piece of a Nile obelisk
    holding your pen-thoughts
    between
    forefinger and thumb
    ready to speak ~
    Be free...scribe ME
    as I, silently listen
    dripping wet from
    your speech
    ~~ Shine drying
    heated by
    desire's
    warmth
    moving me
    to valleys
    raising me
    to peaks
    My Amber Suns
    wrapped around
    the base of
    your tongue ...I Am...
    - faded to Blak -
    heiroglyphics
    remembering
    the feel of
    your ocean
    changing its waves--
    Your language is
    mountain effluvia
    which brushed
    blowing winds
    that broke and
    shaped my thoughts
    like eulogizing
    my poetical baptism
    or an expression of
    a lyrical marriage
    ...til
    .....death
    ........do
    ..........us
    ............part ~


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    BlakVerb ... wow ... You Da Man!
    You Are Da Man !!!!

    beautiful work

    N2urSoul ... simply awesome!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DESTEE

    ......I know this is Blak's piece, but I thank you for
    checkin' out my response to him myself mami...!! :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERB

    N2 U TWO HAS LEFT ME WORDLESS
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    VERY BEAUTIFUL
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    moving, moving, moving....

    ya back up to da' front...
    I can't wait until you finish
    this series.....
     
  8. Afridancr

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    blak...

    You've got me in...TOTAL ADMIRATION of your Skills!!!

    Magnificent!;)
     
  9. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    couldn't have said it better myself...really

    tight scribe bro...
     
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