Black Poetry : The Queens of Destee - The For You Series - Pt. 2 (GA SunShyne)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, May 4, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    take me with you
    I don't have to be next
    to you / just take me with
    you / Love? is what you write /

    sitting next to you when your
    "pen makes love to the pad"
    excites me

    and my body reacts
    in alignment to what I'm feeling

    I am feeling flight
    on a blown kiss
    the landing point on the
    intended heart
    I am feeling a shot
    of euphoria lift me higher
    'til I reach where your love
    is hiding (come out, come out wherever you are)
    I wonder if Utopia is too be like this
    forcing me to become a hedonist cause
    I don't want to be on the opposite
    side with loneliness anymore...
    I am feeling the goosebumped reaction
    you evoke from the needy spirit
    "can you hear it?"
    it's saying "thank you, thank you"
    I am the body waiting to be
    held by your imagination
    so hold me
    ..........hold me with your
    prescribed pain reliever - aka -
    love verses and take away my pain
    pour all your thoughts into a
    pool and let me dive in
    cause if reality is not to far from
    fantasy...I know what you write is
    real

    and I'm a fan ya see...so let me
    dive in and anoint my body with
    your Shyne.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwwwe

    Love ya flow blak!! and positive that sunshyne will too!!:)
    She definately has a way of scribing 'LOVE'!

    *glowing under the 'sunshyne' of inspiration*
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    WoW !!!

    ooohh Boy !!!

    Sunshyne iz gonna LUUUUVVVVVVV this !!!!

    Beautiful work BlakVerb
    Simply Beautiful!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB.....

    as my sisters before me predicted...
    i am loving your flow.
    i am beaming so bryght.
    & i absolutely... positively LOVE this.

    you are so... so... indescribably magnificent
    to Me!... & i've made no secret about that. if
    you are a fan of mine... then i am mos def the
    President of the Blakverb fan club!! :)

    ...before i get too long-winded... i'll just
    say Thank You BeautifulBlakMan!...
    for moving me...
    ..........for inspiring me...
    ...............for reading me...
    ......................for seeing me...

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MAN U HIT THE NAIL ON THE HEAD
    SHE'S IN SWEET HELLO'S RIGHT NOW
    YO PEN AIN'T DOING NO WRONG!
    FLOW HEAD ON....
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your concept ...

    Is tight, and these need to be on the front
    page for eyez to view~~

    Crazy skillz Blak!!
     
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