Black Poetry : The Queens of Destee - The For You Series - Pt. 1 (Destee)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister,
    Queen to my poetical home
    can I stand next to your throne?
    feed you love verses of vines
    that crawl along the walls of my mind
    and listen to you exhale a contented
    sigh of reality, maybe fantasy
    but you are to me what the horizon
    is to the sea / see /
    I grow as far as you take me
    so take me there / take me
    there..................................
    ............take me there somewhere over
    the rainbow feed me hope and dreams and
    scenes of promise that you will
    never give up your rule...and I will
    versically live to serve you
    like a real Man would do.........touch
    you in places that no physical apparatus can
    reach ...and make you say "preach brother preach"
    as I teach in this home that you've built
    for me and all your people /
    so sit there queen let me wipe your brow
    kiss your soul and rub your feet
    cause a nation is never complete
    without a happy queen.

    (C)2001 BLAKVERB
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    LOVIN IT! VERB

    YA FLOW INTO THE KINGOM PLACE OF DESTEE'S QUEENS
    YES THE QUEENZ OF HEART
    MAN THIS BE AS BEAUTIFUL AS IT GETS......
    I'M SURE THEY ALL R SMILING BIG LIKE ME....
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb

    I know this here be for Destee, I just want to say it was absolutely beautiful and I know she appreciates it as I do. Kisses on your mental brotha


    One
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    oohhh BlakVerb ... this is beautiful

    as i read it the first time thru
    i smiled feeling each word that you blew
    into my soul ... nothing left cold
    your flow warming me thru and thru

    i read $$RICH$$ and UbZoRbShUn's love
    thot wow ... could this really be
    BlakVerb is this peace meant for me?
    this flow that's soothing my heart
    this beautiful Blak peace of art?

    ..
    ..

    rushed back to the top of the page
    to read again w/my whole soul engaged
    this is marvelous, simply superb
    My Dear Darling Brother, BlakVerb

    :heart:

    Thank You So Very Very Much!

    Destee
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your mental was ....

    workin' ova time Boo~!

    These "For You" Series of pieces
    are just damned tight Blak!!
     
  6. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    who could have said ti better

    than the elder sean;

    *blakverbs are beautiful.

    sean*
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    so much love in your pen! All the tributes are excellent ~ each one unique, like the Queens of which they speak!

    Flow blak!

    A
     
  8. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    treating myself to another helping of this!

    thank you Blak!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  9. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    have as many helpings as you want. there's plenty where that came from.

    one love,blak
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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