Black Poetry : The Quandry of love

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  1. Murdoc

    Murdoc Member MEMBER

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    Dependance, your air, no your breath they become your breath, your eye sight they become the essence of you.......you cannot BE without their voice, their touch, their essence, you cant do without yourself

    Pain, to hurt? not to hurt? be honest? omit? endure the pain for them? dilemmas, dilemmas, dilemmas, you have a dilemma to spare their feelings? to be honest? now you end up in your second quandary, you weather the pain, the torment, the torture the torture, the excruciating pain, you do this to yourself to spare the one you love of those feelings, love? pain? are they synonymous? in the movies its great in the movies there is no pain? why do i feel such pain why do i torture myself why do i punish myself? do i love her this much to do this to myself??? is it supposed to be like this? love? love? do i even want to have this thing called love, i want to breath on my own!!!!  i need to breath on my own, but my love? what will i do? what do i do? am i supposed to crush her? do i expose her to the suffering the torture the inexplicable ache, the agony the burn the fever the sleeplessness the hurt the laceration of discontent the soreness of tears the throbbing of throat, do i take her heart and rip it out and stand on it and expect her to be ok? that isn't love, is it? is it? WELL IS IT DAMMIT ANSWER ME!!! ANSWER ME WHAT DO YOU DO. frustration anguish anxiety despondency grief heartache martyrdom, that's it be a ******* martyr, SHUT UP KEEP IT INSIDE!!! that's it keep it to yourself spare, spare, spare her she doesn't need it just throw it all away that's love, take the pain make it go away, none will ever know, yeah you will miss her, yes i will miss her, but the pain the suffering that is what you do, BREATH ON YOUR OWN, take control man!!! are you a *****??? SHUT UP! YOUR A MAN, MEN DONT TALK LIKE THIS, buck up boy!!!!! ok ok im fine ..................compose yourself............this is the quandary of love.......
     
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    You have all the symptoms of being in love.

    Treat each symptom lovingly.

    Peace.
     
  3. Murdoc

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    I love her desperatly, the question is to be completly honest and tell her something that happend that would hurt her, or omit completly and never talk to her again to spare her from the hurt...
     
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    the pain we bare in the name of love...
    some things we hold, some things we can't
    but if they love us as much, they will continue to be
    as you speak...

    {Dependance, your air, no your breath they become your breath, your eye sight they become the essence of you.......you cannot BE without their voice, their touch, their essence, you cant do without yourself}

    Very emotive!
     
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    i love this flow...
    love makes you do
    and feel things never thought of...
    hope ta read more of your work...
    welcome to Destee....now enjoy
     
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    love holds nothing back...and so is this scribe...very passionate indeed :)
     
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    Thank you all, you give me motivation. Its the first time i just started to write and it felt great. i hope i get inspired again.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt .....love is a rapture of bliss
    we hold on as long as we can
    but sometime we have to let go
    i felt all the emotions flowin
     
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    you just poured everything into this...you didn't hold anything back and that's what made this so tight...much much love for this.
     
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    wow....emotional...
     
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