Black Poetry : the pumpkin's point of view

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by raheem, May 15, 2001.

  1. raheem

    raheem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I tend to wander outside
    my dark country
    whenever we speak
    Your words are always tinged with
    smiles and laughter,
    and those adorable tongue-licks!

    do you know my
    very happiness resides
    inside the 'pumpkin'
    I be/cum?

    4 u....:D


    You tend to dispell my darkness,
    bathing my eyes with your
    mauves and pinks....
    and I am facsinated by your
    pretty-witty-ness ~
    especially when we mentally
    undress...

    that is to say when we get
    'real'

    We tend to lose track of time
    standing still,
    absorbing
    every verb and tense
    making meaningful
    paragraphs
    of our sweet non~sense

    This tendency we have,
    of groping toward this something,
    touching/holding onto anything,
    hoping for everything....

    makes me wonder if I can
    abandon the strange
    security of my dark country

    after the clock strikes midnight

    and take a chance


    r
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RAHEEM....

    i for one say... Take A Chance...

    you know the sayin's...

    "nothin' ventured... nothin' gained"...
    & "you'll neva know 'til you try"... &...
    well you get what i'm sayin'. ryght? :)

    PE~
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    this sounds like true love
    from any point of view !!

    nice peace Raheem

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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