Black Poetry : The Proposal

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Proposal

    I stood there, watching you
    And came to the realization
    That you are everything
    I’ve ever wanted in a woman
    I can’t even begin to explain
    How just by standing here
    I know that you are the One
    It’s the essence that you posses
    The feelings that I get
    When you are near me
    It’s the thoughts that I have
    About you every day
    And the dreams I dream
    When you are on my mind

    I can not promise you the world
    Or even give you every earthly possession
    All I can offer and give
    Is my heart, my soul, and my life
    I can not phantom life without you
    So I ask you
    Will you be my best friend, my lover,
    And mostly and importantly my wife
    I’m not expecting an answer today
    There is no pressure, so please
    Take your time
    And maybe one day you’ll sing a song
    By Floetry and just “say yes”


    I didn’t know how I felt
    Until just this moment in time
    While I stood there watching you
    Knowing that I want you to be my wife
    Cause life without you is just not complete
    So think and take your time
    Cause Mami, my heart is yours to keep
    I thank you in advance
    My future wife.​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was beautifully pose'd
    her heart will drop and say yes yes yes !!
    she will confess to Da proposal ............

    Man flo on and let ya love shine................
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dawg she already told me no, We split up New Years Eve. But I am good with it.
     
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    at first i thought this was going to be an indecent proposal
    and then this thought became in the disposal

    because i feel my defiantson heartfelt sincere
    and then this lovely vision appear

    that you will give me what your heart desire
    you have driven me to inspire
    this whole entire

    piece
    that's made of pure love and not fleece

    to know that a man would give me his heart, body, and soul
    to me that worth more than the earth gold

    to wakeup with you on my mind
    to be able to occupy some of your time

    makes my heart glad
    still i'm mad

    that all the others joes couldn't satisfy me physically, spiritually, and mentally
    all this and sure to come to please me sexually

    have me walking through the threshhold just to see if there's any harm
    love how you got me mesmerized off your poetic charm

    and i will take thee
    and say give ummm to mee

    what lies behind your chest
    and you gentle kisses urges me to rest
    i must confess

    that i would like to start a life
    and maybe if the lord's willing to become your wife

    to be with cha when our high are highs
    and our low are low's
    this here i'm speaking is not for show

    but real from a girl who wants to discover more than the physical
    Defiantson i can be quite reasonable

    and this My Proposal to you!!!!!!!!!!:kiss1:
     
  5. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it seems like you were watching me while you wrote this. real hot poem.
     
  6. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, thanks Nevar and blak_soul you two made my day.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    then she wasn't the mate she seem to be
    your true love will reveal herself to thee
    trust me ........she was only a side road in your path.
    peace & love bruh !
     
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    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW, This right here is beautiful, beautiful poem...
    This is one of the sweetest poems I have read... Oh yes I am feelin' this
     
  9. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No doubt, she missed out on a good thing. And thanks for the love both of you.
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Defiantson.....

    BEAUTIFUL..... I likes
     
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