Black Poetry : The Proposal

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THE CANDLE FLICKERS SLOWLY
    HER EYEZ SPARKLE IN IT'S LIGHT
    THERE IS MAGIC IN THE AIR
    ON THIS ENCHANTED NIGHT

    ROMANTICLY SPEAKING SOFTLY
    WHISPERS HEARD GENTLY
    EVEN WE SIT ALL ALONE
    WITH A SWEET MELODIC TONE
    OUR MINDZ ROAM THOUGHTS
    OF A PROPOSAL

    SO WARM EMBRACES
    CARESSED LOOKS TO OUR FACES
    I POSE A SINGLE RED ROSE
    AND PLEDGE MY DEVOTION

    WILL SHE OFFER ME THE HEART'S KEY
    AS I MIRRORED HER EMOTIONS

    I PLACE IN HER PALM A RED VELVET BOX
    SWEET JUBLEE TEARS BEGIN TO DROP
    IS SHE STRUGGLING TO REMAIN CALM

    BEFORE U MY LOVETH OPEN THE BOX
    REMEMBER CAREFULLY DIS CAN MAKE
    MY HEART STOP !

    SO SLOWLY OPEN IT WIT GRACE
    AS I HOLD U WIT SWEET EMBRACE
    AS I CARESS YA GENTLNESS OF
    LOVE AND AFFECTION THE TOKEN
    IS FROM MY HEART OF DIRECTIONS
    INSIDE LAY A SPARKLING BRILLIANT
    RING IS WHERE I WISH YA HEART TO SING

    I SPEAK NOW HUMBLE TONE
    AS MY HANDS OF HOPE TOUCH & ROAM
    WHISPERS SPOKEN IN VIEW
    WORDS OF I:heart: U

    TO YOU DIS DAY I SO VOW
    MY OPEN HEART TO U
    AND RESPECT WIT HONOR
    MY LOVETH SO TRUE
    I BRING MY WARM EMBRACE
    AND VOW TO NEVER LEAVE DIS PLACE
    I SO LOVE U DEARLY
    ALWAYS THEIR WHEN U NEED ME
    I'LL BE YA LIGHT WHEN IT'S DARK
    CARESS YA HEART WHEN IT HURT
    SHOW U TRUE LOVE WORK

    SAY U WILL AND BE MY LIFE
    I SHALL COMFORT THEE
    AND TRUELY BE BLESSED
    TOSS YA ARMS AROUND ME
    AS I HOLD U CLOSE
    LET ME HERE DA WHISPERS
    OF YES YES YES !!!

    MY PROPOSAL OF LOVE
    IS THE FINE RAPTURE OF FAITH
    IT HOLD A BEAUTY U CAN TASTE
    U FEEL THE GRACE OF SWEETNESS
    CROSS YA FACE SO MY LOVETH
    DON'T LEAVE ME IN THIS PLACE ....

    LET ME HEAR U WHISPER
    YES YES YES !
    AND KISS DA PAGE I SO STAIN:heart: :kiss:
    $R
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MY LOVE IS ON THE TABLE
    FOR A SWEET WOMAN 'S
    WHOM ABLE
    TO COME JOIN HANDZ
    AND MAKE DIS BEAUTIFUL STAND
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rich....this is so cweet :cry: can't nobody thouch you on your sweetness Rich...its all you...:) :) :) :spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    suga & spice everythang niceeeeeeeee!
    Thankz swtT...
     
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    WOW:spinstar:

    The sweetness of romance and the uniqueness of proposals!
    Beautiful Flow!

    Much luv from the Richromancefanclub! Very nice!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THE PROPOSAL OF LOVETH FROM SELF HEART
    THIS WHERE WE BEGIN AND START
    I CLOSE MY EYES AND OPEN MY THOUGHT
    TO A VOW OF LOVE .....INSIDE WHAT WE CALL
    A PROPOSAL ........THANKZ ANGELICSAGE.....
    WOW!
    FAN CLUB....!!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rich
    awwww
    this is indeed
    a wonderful Proposal
    feeling the emotion
    so deep is the vibes
    each line brings
    tears to my eyes
    heartfelted
    this is so wonderful
    so gentle yet firm
    your love proposal
    a ring that bond,
    it complete the circle
    the whisper is
    heard, felted and shared
    this is so wonderful
    Your Love Proposal
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes thank u my friend
    from way down deep
    within da proposal of
    love and hold
    as this all unfold
    thank u again
    to let da world know
    love still aflo
    it a vow of heart in any moment of tymeeeeeeeeeee!
    together we shine on !
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the proposal of heart & love i vow
    can u hear me !???
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whispers "yes, yes, yes... what beautiful poetry"


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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