Black Poetry : The problem with "She"!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The problem with she how could it be.
    Led a life that was so restrictive
    How could she know he would be so
    addictive...His love flow so vindictive.

    The problem with she, she didn't know
    how to live free.
    Tethered from youth...with sexuality
    she had no excuse!
    So full of passion and now the blues!

    The problem with she,she couldn't
    control, the hold he had on her
    soul and the truth would now
    unfold...Could she dare be so
    bold?

    The problem with she, was the
    little known secret, she couldn't
    forget ,would always regret.
    Was gambling and had nothing
    to bet.

    The problem with she , is she
    loved too hard, heart broken
    stabbing like glass shards
    Too much neglect in her life
    She would do anything to
    be a wife.

    The problem with she, was
    she never knew love,
    was trapped
    like a sacrificial dove...
    Like a addict she craved.
    The love had her enslaved.

    The problem with she, was
    she couldn't be free, til the
    chains that were unseen
    made her feel so unclean.
    The problem with she was
    a need to be free...
    And not knowing what
    free...really was!
    BJS(C)2002
     
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    luvtoluv Member MEMBER

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    Amen...

    Flow on.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for reading!

    It might be a woman thang to some, but to me it's a human thang, not being in control of your emotion to the point of self imposed bondage...whoa! I have seen somethings....

    Blessings On ya House @ Thanks for the read!
     
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