Black Poetry : The Problem is YOU!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Watcher, May 29, 2002.

  1. Watcher

    Watcher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You snapped, crackled, then you popped
    Once a lovely queen
    Adversarial you’ve become
    Feeling like the world is against you
    You lash out
    At the ones who try to help you
    Mood swings
    night to day
    Day to night
    Permanent PMS
    Nobody knows
    Which way you coming from
    Stressed out
    You need to be stressed free
    One good stiff
    You know what I mean
    Relax your mind, body and spirit
    Free yourself from unnecessary tension
    By allowing your body
    To feel what it craves
    Thoughts of the past
    Open doors to the present
    Afraid to walk through
    Forever left to wander
    Outside of what you could have
    Meanwhile the rest of the world
    Suffers because of your
    Occasional tantrums
    Get a life
    And a purpose
    Or just simply drop dead.
     
  2. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now thats coooold
    I dont know who you are talking to but I know plenty to whom it does apply and I am sure that it needed to be said
    but it's still cooold (lol)
     
  3. Watcher

    Watcher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man I just call it how I watch it.....We were having a gathering this past weekend, and this girl just started snapping on folks...been doing this for quite awhile, but she chose the wrong person this time...She chose me......so I had to handle the bizness.....but you right I know a lot of folks who go crazy for no reason......they betta snap themselves back to reality...
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    LOOK AT THAT BIG EYEBALL

    popping out the socket :lol:

    Watcher,

    you are a trip! :)

    i enjoy reading your work whenever
    i have the time

    i can't think of the name of one of
    your poems that caught my attention

    i think i'll have to go back and repost
    it again

    but anyway, nice job

    pd
     
  5. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I still thinnk that eye is creepy !

    But brother man , remind me to stay on the sane side of you !

    Your right though, there must be something in the water or the moon hass some extra special mojo latley cause even the folks down here in the ATL are trippin !

    Handle your bizness sweetie !
     
  6. Watcher

    Watcher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HOLD UP!!

    What the hell you trippin on!!! This post is not even directed towards you...Now I been watching you trip, but hey i wasn't trying to get in your biz....But now you doing the same thing you accused Keme of and that's hating on my piece...I'm sorry if you think this was a reflection on you, but if you would note my reply above this was a response due to a bbq gathering this weekend!!!! Here's a clue Read!!!! This is not about you....This is not your ******** World where everything is about you.....you think it's you against the ******** community...well i got news for you I ain't thinking about you....Now I liked the pieces you posted but then **** this is what I get in return? Now of course i guess I'll get a slam because you got to have the last say......you got to be right...you think its a **** conspiracy!!! but hey just like you I can speak my **** mind too...now you wanna keep it real the deal is this.....if folks don't want to respond to you then they don't have to....it's their **** choice!!! **** you supposed to be in your forties and you trippin like a teenager....I ain't done nothing too you so step off.........But I know you again you got to have the last say...c'mon bring it.....i ain't got nothing more to say.........you can rant all you want, but stay out of my **** bizness!!! You so busy trying to point fingers look at your **** self.....how many folsk do you post to or how many do you read and move on????? ***** you!!! you wanna act like a nygger, i'm gonna respond like one!!!! you been causing trouble every since you got here....first you started getting involved with Rich Kitana and Cindy...Started mess there....then you moved on to Rich, Bishop and me......you talking about games...you starting the ****!!!!!!!!!!

    ***** You!!!!!

    Destee I apologize.....but you know how I am!!!!!
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WAS ABOUT TO APOLOGIZE...

    WAS ABOUT TO APOLOGIZE, BUT NOW I SEE WHY YOU HAVE ONLY ONE EYE...MYOPIC! YOU JUST GOT THROUGH COMMENTING ON ANOTHER OF YOUR POEMS...SO WHY WOULDN'T I THINK THAT.
    AND AS FOR DREDGING UP OLD DEAD ****... LITTLE I DIDN'T HAVE A PROBLEM WITH YOU ADMIRED AND REVERENCED ALL THAT YOU DO. BUT YOU JUST AS PSYCHO AS YOU CLAIM ME TO BE...AND YOU NEED TO REMEMBER
    I AM KEEPING IT COOL FOR DESTEE.
    HAVE PEACE IN YOUR SOUL AND DON'T WORRY ABOUT ME.
    CAUSE I AM A QUEEN THAT BE FOREVER FREE.
    CONSPIRACY THEORY...NO SMALL MINDED WANNA BE POETS
    WHO HAVE NO SKILLS AND DON'T EVEN KNOW IT!
    I AIN'T MADD, CAUSE NOW YOU SHOWED YOUR TRUE COLORS.
    DO YOU USE THOSE FOUL LIPS TO KISS YOUR MOTHER?
    ****... DIDN'T EVEN GIVE ME A CHANCE TO APOLOGIZE FOR
    YOU GO POPPIN WITH THAT ONE BIG BUCK EYE!
    :rolleyes: SO , SORRY IF I OFFENDED THEE, BUT YOU DISRESPECT ANY WOMAN AND YOU DISRESPECT EVEN ME......
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm yall

    what's going on? I know I been gone for like 4 or 5 months and all and I have some reading to do, but can someone tell me what the hell exploded in here?
     
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