Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Jan 11, 2005.
The Interestingly Sage Series
you droped it like it was hot!!...the new sytle im diggin deeply like a shovel...
I SEE U GIVING THEM SOMETHING THEY CAN FEEL ,,LIKE SPARKLE ..LOL..IM STANDING ON CHAIRS CLAPPING FOR THE VIBE ....ITS LAID BACK AND CHILL
AND REAL ...IT FELT GOOD TO WRITE THIS DIDNT IT ..THE RELEASE WAS GREAT I BET ,,,,LOVE U AND YOUR WORK AS U KNOW ...HOOKUP ... ..
surely i didn't mis~the message on this note
and i didn't rush into a quote but took my time
as this shine from a divine soul of mis~used
contents and flashed like fire or some desire
i didn't mis~understand but never know i'm
only man i didn't mis~taken what i read but
took it in as a feed to the mis~nouned mental
what was laid here was understanding and
educational not from a poet but a scribing soul
AWESOME TYTE WRITE
Yo this was tyte....I enjoyed the read misses...i did have to take my time....to make sure i didn't Miss anything. Well done....took me for a ride.
'The Interestingly Sage Series'
Now THIS is a series I'm really gettin into. Lawd, sis, thurr ya go again, flippin another side to the prism for us all to examine. mmm mmm mmm
Know this, that I'm not mis~understandin you at all, because those early life mis~interpretations make for easy mis~understandings, mis~calculations and mis~takes in life. Oh yes. Been mis~sing out on some stuff because of that problem too.
But see, you didn't mis~judge the situation - you are facin it head on - and that's half the battle. Wise mis~tresses don't hold on to their mis~understandings forever, once they understand and get to work.
Love this piece, sister girl. You da bomb diggy! Peace.
I'm standing on the chair next to "hook-up" ...just to make sure, my claps are heard ...
*clapping* ..."Standing Ovation"... *clapping*
I am applying thunderous claps ... to a raging "storm"
*taking a deep breath and releasing* I'm speechless!
*encore* *encore* *encore* *encore*
Taking a pause, just because.....Sometimes what we have learned colors our opinions, giving present day occurrences the wrong hue. Other times the colors are a perfect match. It's just being human that causes all the confusion. This was wonderfully laid, it was as though I could hear you thinking this all through. Sage, sis, this was so emotively wonderful!!!!!!
Girl, there was no mis-interpreting what you was trying to say....feeling this flow on anotha level.....Nuff Luv xxx
I'm really diggin 'on this one. Not only did I read slow, but I read twice. So twice I say, Nice, nice.
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