Black Poetry : The Prayer of Two

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  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Her:

    I wonder what
    he thinks of me?
    Can he see me as
    his wife?
    His other half?
    Hmmmm such a delicious man
    and I sure want him in my life.
    Lord can I have that desire of my
    heart?

    Him:

    She's staring at me
    with that strange glint in her
    eyes again.
    I hear wedding bells faintly.
    Well she is rather attractive and
    we do connect on many levels.
    I could see myself with her.
    She could indeed be the woman for
    me.
    God, mom's warned me about this
    part in life comming up.
    Is she the one for me or not?

    Her:

    God I just want a man
    I can love and who loves me.
    No B.S, no stress, just love and devotion.
    He seems like a good, good, christian man.
    Is he the one for me Lord?

    Him:

    Her
    as the mother of my kids?
    Thats a real good sight to behold.
    Us together, growing old and loving each
    other. Hmmmm not bad at all.
    She is real beautiful inside and out,
    but is she the one for me?

    Both:

    DEAR GOD WE JUST WANT TO BE
    IN THE CENTER OF YOUR WILL. IS HE/SHE THE
    RIGHT ONE FOR ME TO SHARE MY LIFE WITH?


    "The Effectual Fervent prayers of the righteous
    availeth much."
    James 5:16 This is how it should be when
    choosing a mate.​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful scribe on point and real thankz
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: Oh Yes! Oh Yes! Oh Yes! :heart:


    This is certainly the way it should be and boy did you paint the scene beautifully with your pen.

    Joyce
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW, this was nice, great scribe
     
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    WoW Dior!
    You are like
    Dr.Frankinstein!
    Always creating
    a masterpiece!
    Tyte scribe!
     
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    Oh...this was so wonderful
    and inspirational...

    Beautiful Message!
     
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    another masterpiece
    tight drop
    loved it!!!!!
    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As always Rich, I am totally thankful to you for your continuous love and support. God bless.
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My darling Queen of Haiku's
    I thank you so much for your support. You are truly a fountain of talent and wisdom. Your words of encougragement make me smile
    each and every day. I am deeply moved and deeply appreciative of
    you and everything you stand for.
     
  10. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet of the week!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Thank you for your beauty. God bless.
     
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