Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Power Of The "P"(en)

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  1. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    When I’m feeling
    Low and kinda Funky
    Or High off life and kinda Spunky
    Nothing can move my groove
    Or chase away my melancholy
    Recording From good fortune to sad folly
    Like the inter-galactic
    Supernaturally Stenographically
    Spastic
    Past and Futuristically
    Fantastic
    Purging power of
    The “P. “

    Cuz only the “P” can so
    Everlastingly
    Fluorescently
    Illuminatingly
    Capture what we
    Think and feel
    So, for me
    My hand-held diety
    Is always
    Alpha and Omega
    The brightest shining Vega
    The “P.”

    The “P” is far mightier than the sword
    It can’t be ignored
    Its powerful pourings
    Its own reward
    Its mind in accord
    With yours
    Painfully paying penance
    Or purifying perversions
    On parchment excursions
    Yes, as for me
    Make my lyrical affliction
    The diction
    Whether truth or fiction
    The guilty as charged
    Conviction
    Of the “P.”




    "Make my funk tha P-funk. I want my phunk uncut..."
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up sis i can feel ya P-funk of da P-en
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, and this was uncut alright. You flexed those poetic muscles and I was diggin it poetess, write on.
     
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    Hello Cherryblossom...

    This read spoken with a funky beat backing it up.

    Here, here for "the power of the "P"(en)"!


    Thanks for sharing the groove of your pen with us.:)


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    Thanxs Fo' Da Gift...

    Cherry Blossoms Must Be In Bloom...

    ♪ ♫ ♪​


    "Wid all dem poly-rhythms 'n rhymes on top of dat syncopated snare leav'n yo' finga-popp'n poetic prancing for our pleasure through the power of yo' pen—whew!" Make my funk the p-funk...

    Just fo da funk of it...(Smile)

    Good Stuff, Cherry

    Lokman
     
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    ooh wee sister C, what yo lyrics do to me. Gwan wit yo bad self. You one bad mother, shut yo mouth, I'm just taking bout the funk!
    Haha lol, I'm loving this. Fun write! you brightened my night wit this one :)
     
  7. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Thank you, Rich, Watz, CoCo, Lokman, and Lataisha!

    I wrote that piece over a year ago, but I do remember having fun with it! I was havin' a Parliament moment! :em0100:


    Thank you for "phunkin" with me!
     
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    Cherry,

    your creativity and use of the alphabet is an amazing talent.
    Being a member of the the "P" Funk generation and a fan of
    Parliament Funkadelics, Bootsy Collins, and the Great George Clinton...
    you've struck a chord with this Masterpiece!!!!

    "P. Funk, uncut funk, the bomb! Go head gyrl! P'oetry at its best!


    epiphany:heart:


     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Oh, Sister! You really know how to put a smile on my face!

    And, I FEEL YA! We just need to stay away from "Lollipop Man alias The Long-Haired Sucka!" lol
     
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