Black Poetry : the power of "P"

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by tzevi1278, Feb 7, 2005.

  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peek into my poetry,
    perception piercing pen marks protrude from the parchment,
    provoking you to park it and grove to the sharp wit.
    Anytime I spark it,
    prepare to push margin
    beyond the point of pausin’.
    Piles of punctuation proudly prance upon the paper,
    policing paraphrases with the poise of Pharaoh’s sages.
    but please believe,
    I’m from a power pennin’ pedigree.
    My moms don’t raise *******,
    so phuckin’ me is a pointless possibility.
    Your prosthetic pen method is pretty phuckin’ pathetic,
    poppin’ off at the mouth,
    when your poems portray a pitiful lack of effort.
    Sub par pages of prehistoric ideology,
    lead me to believe you majored in advanced pussiology.
    I’m sure you write your lyrics in purple and pink ink,
    and people perceive you as poetry’s weak link.
    Phuckin’ peon, your rhymes are more ****ty than the porcelain I pee on.
    Be gone,
    or face the wrath of a punch line providing phenom.
    My lines are never pliable, always permanent and undeniable,
    prone to permeate a persons point-of-view
    until they’re susceptible to try a few
    of my concepts and in depth professions.
    Beseeching but never preaching the power of life’s lessons.
    Pleased to be the pious picture painter with my thoughts,
    until my profound prescriptions reach the peak of the apex sought.



    Copyright 2005
    © Ramarla D. Rozier
    Kiastar inc. Krate Creations publishing
     
  2. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    man....your one of the best pens in here man....mad love for your mind ...all need to learn from a power poetic mind like yours man .....great work ...hookup
     
  3. SoothinDivinity

    SoothinDivinity Active Member MEMBER

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    Crazy Hot

    That was such greatness. You should have seen my face when I got done reading..... :eek:hmy: .... I think that was the face. :) I loved this one. Your talent has no limits. Keep doin you.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome tyte drop here whoaaaaaaaaa!!!!!
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop ...flow head on....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Plucking the "p" from poetry and spraying it all over the page. No words for such excellence, bravo poet. Do flow on.
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:

    I will never look at the letter "P" in the same light...ever again

    Poet you ripped this...like u ain't got good sense...smh :toast:
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I needed to quote some of this.../ it was just that wicked...
    *you were flexin on this one :weights:
     
  9. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    yo dun...your packin a powerful poetic power punch
    keep droppin dem....word

    one love
    khasm
     
  10. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This episode was brought 2 U by the letter "P"...

    U knocked it outta here with this one.

    Nice.
     
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