Black Poetry : THE ~~POISON~~SHIP

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticMaster, Mar 22, 2001.

  1. PoeticMaster

    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when the ship sail the sea
    of hell and slavery

    i lay flat on the floor
    in hope when the whip
    slash my back chain'up
    my blood clot
    my skin turn black

    back in an insane world
    no guts nor feelins'
    no reason
    day and night work
    all 4 season

    the ashes that sleep
    on buoyant ship make
    me weep
    some call it the plague
    of black death
    some call it no justice
    last breath taken in wisdom
    now understand
    in knowledge
    our love ones died in 1800's
    for our live today
    is it a disease
    is it fate
    no cure
    yet not to late
    des poison ship of death
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good work PM!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  3. nubianlover

    nubianlover Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i see u on a nother Masterpiece
    nicely done
     
  4. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    without the poison ship

    i wouldn't have POETICMASTER
    loving your work here
    caught the eye of a So'ja
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You blew it up with this one here....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DES TOOK ME SOMEWHERE
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PM (my Nubian Kang)...

    thanks for sharing this...

    **quiet & reflective**

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  8. honeyluv

    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes u r most def the poeitcmaster indeed
    wow!!
     
  9. PoeticMaster

    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the truth be within ...
    thankz family
     
  10. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    i'm with Street So'ja
    without that i might never have had you

    thanking God for all things

    beautiful flow PoeticMaster

    :heart:

    Destee