Black Poetry : The Poets mix

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaz, Jul 11, 2002.

  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Two parts ambiguity Or precise imagery
    One part vague recollection or exact recall
    Mix to taste OR not
    And serve hot or cold
    No matter the flavor
    The temperature or time
    Lumpy or smooth
    Or emphasized with rhyme
    The poet’s mix
    Must always be served
    with
    HEART and SPINE
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    A poet mix
    is da flava
    of
    emotional feelins
    a mix of heart
    a body & soul
    da rhyme of one's tongue
    high and low 's
    their poetic shows
    is how a poet flow
    wit all their
    wisdom of thoughts
    da thangz they see
    da mix is what one go
    through see poet's
    is u & me ............
     
  3. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Yeah!

    Shaz that was just too fly!!! Was that a freestyle?

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  4. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Say It!!!
     
  5. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Summed it up in the last two lines...

    Straight, no chaser. Tight!

    Bert
     
  6. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$Rich$$
    as always I love the flow back, much luv bro

    Reason
    thank you for reading and glad you liked the flow
    but to call it a freestyle would be somewhat a no no
    the river from which I flowed
    is nourished and can only grow
    when I drink from the waters
    from which the greater poets flow
    I do not recall the inspiring tide
    From whence this poem did grow
    But it was most def up here in Destee’s house
    That the seed did flow

    I know!I know! you didn’t exactly ask me all that **** (my bad)

    Heartbeat- Congratulations on your new book
    Thanks for the read poet

    Bert
    thanks for the read
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey shaz, I'll

    take mine shaken not stirred with two black olives!!!!!!!!!!! Love the delivery





    One:toast:
     
  8. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll take one and another to go

    love sippin on this poetry mix :rolling:
     
  9. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sherykah
    "you read this over the cell phone" now Y U gotz to be a show off! (lol) they say my phone can get the internet but I an't got the 2 years it'l take me to learn how.
    Thanks for the read poet

    UbZoRbShUn
    this ain't burger King!
    but you know you can still have it your way

    Natasha
    thank you for the read poet glad you liked
     
  10. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm diggin' da mix
    BTW:
    your reply to Reason was so poetic.
    Very nice flow.

    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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