Black Poetry : The Poet

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Jun 10, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    He sings iambic
    songS that give birth to Each meANingful verse

    Idyll.

    With continuous glances
    and careful stares
    of his works of art
    I analyze some of
    his substance based
    on his words
    ...and

    I

    consider the impossible
    embodying his poetry
    that medicates inspiration

    Thinking...
    Do I
    mistake perceptions of reality
    whenever I read him
    only to suppress my natural
    ability to respond

    I

    believing only in his creativity
    am left drawing pictorial remnants
    with left over phrases that I
    recall

    his force of thoughts
    illustrate differences of
    opinions and impart
    a musician's soul~o

    ~Layered love songs that
    drown out sadness... and
    I can visually
    See his name in each line
    that I write

    The Poet
    extracts
    my soul and infuses
    his own

    - introducing me to his world
    - resonating dimensional acoustics
    that make soothing waves in my
    ocean
    ... he... is the residual effect that
    remains imbedded deeply
    within me
    long after the time
    it takes readers
    to digest
    this scribe




    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2001
    Messages:
    647
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    student, advocate to change the world
    Location:
    someplace dreams are made of
    Ratings:
    +1
    **********WOW**********

    :) :D :D :D :D :) :lol:
    thank you for the poem! i will keep this framed in my room and always think of you!

    Thank you so MUCH!!!!!!!!!

    sean. :)
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    No, I thank you...

    Sean, you are more than welcome!! :kiss:

    I'm glad to know that you like this melody that I have presented you with. You have exceptional talent and I admire the skills that you own.

    I most definitely love reading your pieces and am also glad you share plenty of them here.

    Keep the love flowin' ... it is received well!!

    One :heart:
     
  4. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    1,154
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    African Dance Instructor/Cultural Educator
    Location:
    Buffalo
    Ratings:
    +0
    N2

    Tight sis!! You've got madd skills!! This is deserving of the one you speak...S E A N the poet!:D
     
  5. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 2, 2001
    Messages:
    1,303
    Likes Received:
    4
    Occupation:
    motherhood
    Location:
    maryland
    Ratings:
    +4
    this was a really nice ode to thepoetsean...
    and it was done in such a cool way...
    thank you.
    -7:spinstar:
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    Afri~

    Hey Sista-friend...
    -- don't thank me alone, thank Thepoetsean for he is the one with the skills & abilities as well as many of our brothas & sistas here in DesteeLand! :D

    Girl, ya' know I appreciate the read!

    :heart:feltpoetry
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    WldFlr 7

    Thank ya' girl, I'm glad you enjoyed this!

    Oneluv.
     
Loading...