Khasm13 : the (((((((())))))) poem...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    the color of your eyez
    reflect back vibes
    that tantalize
    i'm most willingly mesmorized....

    so much can be said with a simple gesture
    the little things in life bring pleasure
    like wake'n up next to you
    thas my tiny treasure
    that i measure
    each and everyday
    only fools play
    love cheap
    not fully appreciating the sweet
    taste of blissful heat
    like each time
    our anticipating waiting
    lips meet
    these feelings are so unique
    to actually catch visions of heaven
    in panoramic vision with twin speaks
    cause as friends and lovers we run neck and neck
    i can't front...at first it was your body
    but now it's your mind i respect
    to the fullest
    you have the inner strength to pull us
    both if you had to
    but long as i'm standing you'll never have to
    gurl
    each time i stare in your eyes i pass thru
    the 9th dimension
    where both of our hearts are one elongated extension
    of the entire universe
    as cosmic dust covers us both
    the eternal sands of time
    show our footsteps deep submersed
    in the sea of soulmates
    us walking hand and hand
    past people preaching hate
    to a real world reality wonderland
    that we create and make....
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da color of love
    dis was beautifully writen from da heart
    flow on
     
  3. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte scribe. keep flowin. much love :)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now you know i likes this on.....
    tight drop
    posed well....Angel
     
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    this is a natural affection
    of the road i love to travel on
    the sweet embrace of a simple romance
    that means more then a physical chance...
    fine in the body beauty in the mind...
    strenght of a union close in bond....
    this is the kind of flow that sticks with more ..
    a gentle river...with a soft snow flake float
    Peace
    Blue:heart:
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very very beautiful...what a lucky lady!
     
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    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diggin' this cosmic love flow ... very deep...

    Much Peace,

    Akilah :spinstar:
     
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    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was really gorgeous :)
    I was just gettin caught up in your lines,
    Becoming intertwined,
    With thoughts of these words,
    Being whispered in my ear,
    Piercing my lonely atmosphere...
    But then...your words come to an end.
    Which is why i had to read them again :spin:
     
  9. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was on top of it all. I like this alot. I feel the passion of it. I really like this.
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ....heeeeeyyyy :sand:
    I got lost in this one...
    but I'm slowly finding myself...
    and you say you don't
    like love poetry...but
    your write it so well
    ....I absorbed every word^5
     
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