Black Poetry : The poem they called a foundling...

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  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (this is really crappy...don't let the big words fool ya...just tryna break up that "horrible curse" :smile: )


    these orgulous monsters that haunt my words at night
    come in a horrendous seriatim; my contravenous flight
    does not prosper in the light of these creatures...
    they rape me of my words and my creativity and my spirit
    they're ineluctable.....be still, and you can hear it's
    never ending swoosh of the theivery they make
    most creators find it hard to remunerate
    the damage that once is caused by this devilish fate...
    As they continually aggravate the artist is taken back to the state
    of pure nonage.....no wizened mark can be found upon
    one's countenance when this daemon has won....forthcomes
    no stroke of the pen or even whisper of thought
    has provoked after this horrible fiend has wrought
    injustifiable misery upon every tender brain he has sought....
    you find yourself in an extreme dilatory transformation.....
    every malcontent action makes you subject to the worst tergiversation
    until one can no longer bear the nimiety of such stress
    'yes!' chants the daemon whose work is at rest
    'i have broken the blessed puist of this artist
    and given it's stream of scribe the hardest
    and most ineluctable submission of alll....
    to my grasp one cannot help to fall
    only the strong! yes! only the strong!
    can see it's way through this curse, strong as a rock....
    my magical spell which can be called the "WRITER'S BLOCK".'
     
  2. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Poem.
     
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    Girl, this isn't crappy at all! I like the flow. And it's great to read you again. :coffee:
     
  4. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    manasiac...thanks for the :heart:

    gempy....i miss you too babe!! hope to see more of you as well!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this sho nuff tyte block removed
    flow on poet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Those powerful words just burst through that block, I liked your scribe.
     
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    very nce drop:)
    hi:wave:so nice
    reading you again
    much love
    Peace
    Bluewater:heart:
     
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    One word...

    Write.
     
  9. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$, watz, Blue, and Pos.....thanks for the :heart:
    Mo power to you

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    tight joint...
    all blocks must eventually come to an end...
    one love
    khasm
     
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