Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Poem of a Woman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bruce, May 28, 2003.

  1. Bruce

    Bruce Active Member MEMBER

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    Like whispers in a summer’s wind
    Her words leave her heart
    Warm and full
    She’ll only write them
    When she’s all alone
    Thus the stage is set for a woman’s poem

    One may write by candlelight
    Another only when the sun is bright
    Perhaps in the gr*** of a secluded park
    Or under the stars when the sky is dark
    She is patient with her thoughts
    She will not rush, she will not press
    A woman chooses when best to express

    It will be quiet
    In her mind the only conversation
    All can be dismissed
    Without pause or explanation
    A woman’s poem so close to her heart
    When she cries or smiles
    Her poem will start

    In a woman’s poem
    Much is revealed
    But mysteries remain
    In what is always concealed
    For that you must read between each line
    But it is the poem of a woman
    And no matter how divine
    What you seek most
    You will never find

    BE
    © 2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho ya right ................tyteeeeeeeee scribe as alwayz
     
  3. Bruce

    Bruce Active Member MEMBER

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    thank you RICHNESS. As always your response is greatly appreciated. Is gr*** a forbidden word because of its use as another name for marijuana? Dumb question I see its just the *** part.
    peace,
    be
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    that one is cool .......man u droppin' some hot flava round here
    love how u flow ........a true poet u r my brutha
     
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    you hit this one right on the head! lol! we woman are indeed mysterious. we can even confuse ourselves. tyte scribe Bruce!
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Bruce, :wave:

    This is beautifully expressed!! A wonderful read. Thanks for sharing this one.

    ~Sierra~ :)
     
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    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow i like this and you are so right,
    a womaan's poetry is very personal and disguised.
    the only way i can express myself is through my poetry!!!!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bruce ..its obvious that you know what your talking about!!!.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MmmmmHmmmm...Bruce where you been all my life :) LOL lovely scribe
     
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    Sassysammy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with the gentlemen the habits of writing for woman as I can say for myself are very mysterious and personal.
    loved the scryb!
     
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