Black Poetry : The Poem In Tears

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  1. Flor_Rosada

    Flor_Rosada Member MEMBER

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    Why must a good person be the one to get hurt?
    Become a black sheep, become an outskirt?

    Corruption is always brung into their lives,
    Stops them in the middle of their steps of strives?

    But this harmless person always wids-up doing harm,
    There is never a warning, not even an alarm.

    And all they can do is cry, let all their anger out,
    Have grief, dissappointment, even doubts.

    Then their smile soon goes away,
    Their cheerfulness, their pureness start to fade.

    Their heart hurts so much they count the scars,
    Their imprisoned with their life, all they can do is count the bars.
     
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    Bad things happen to good people, sometimes it can't be explained away, I like the way you brought this, keep flowin.
     
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    Excellent flow! Welcome to the family.
     
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    Bad things happen 2 good people because the Usurper wants us 2 stray from the path of seeking righteousness.

    I've been down that road recently, where I was thinking about resorting back 2 my old ways because things weren't going the way I thought they should, instead I stayed the course...

    I'm glad that I did.

    Very nice piece, little sister, be steadfast & don't let anything or one bring U down...

    It's just a test...Will U pass or fail?
     
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    very nice scribe
    lovin da flow u pose here
    let da ink continue
     
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    Flor_Rosada Member MEMBER

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    :heart: Thank you for all the love :heart:
     
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    very nice flow, keep it coming
     
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    Flor, I really do hear ya. And this flow is tight. Hope to read more
     
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