Black Poetry : The Pleasure of Pleasing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Oct 16, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Because we’re in love
    My joy is loving you
    You’re so beautifully receptive
    To the things I do

    To see that sparkle in your eyes
    Inspires me to kiss your thighs
    The anxious movement of your hips
    Makes me smile while I’m kissing your lips

    I’m so happy with our sexual flow
    What makes me happy is you love it so
    We do it like that
    The highest level of romance
    I’m pleased because you’re pleased
    As we do our sexual dance

    I’m honored to be your sexual chauffer
    Driving you here, driving you there
    I just love taking you on our intimate ride
    I love seeing your face
    Describe what you feel inside

    Your rhythms tell me
    This pleasure must last
    My loving is obedient
    Can’t explode too fast
    I’ll just enjoy our time
    This I can do forever
    Pleasing you baby
    Gives me so much pleasure

    BE

    © Bruce H. Edwards, 2000
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey BE......

    now this be what i call sexual healing
    sho ya groove thang!!!:toast:
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: hey BE......

    oooooooOH! I'LL HAVE WHAT SHE'S HAVING!
    DO YOUR THANG.......WONDERFUL SONNET!
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "I'm honoured to be your sexual chauffer"..well that line just goes ahead and says everything...

    The thing I love most about reading your "love" poetry BE...is that to me, the word respect is stamped boldly and clearly on everything you say...you sir, have the qualities of a gentleman...

    K
     
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    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a good read!!!!!!!!!!
     
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