Black Poetry : The Player

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SupaUgly, Sep 5, 2005.

  1. SupaUgly

    SupaUgly Member MEMBER

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    The Player

    Can I get inside your mine

    Drop a few lines

    To show you I am not wasting your time

    Who am I you ask

    I’m just a brotha who appreciates a good thing when he sees one

    And every man you turned down in here knows exactly

    Where I’m coming from

    What makes me different from the rest

    I’m sure you can attest from the way I walk, talk and dress

    You’ve separated the strong from the less

    I’m not here to play games

    I just wanted to know your name

    And if you’re feeling what I’m saying

    There might be some numbers exchanged

    You said you have a man

    Oh I understand

    We can still be friends

    I will give you my number just incase there’s a change in plans
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everyone wants someone who is going to be true, one who is not going to make a plaything out of you. I appreciated the vibe of this flow.
     
  3. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alight this was indearing and you made a move at the end. Can't hate you for that. Keep doing your thing.
     
  4. $ms>GET IT

    $ms>GET IT Active Member MEMBER

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    that was a good piece and thats just how them players come at me.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    playa playa action .......dis was tyte like how u ended this piece .
     
  6. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Playa, Playa, Nice poem.
     
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