Black Poetry : The Pit Of Black

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  1. Sodwn2earth

    Sodwn2earth Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep down in the pit of black
    Burns bright the world’s evil,
    hellish souls held back.

    Ghouls of evil doings,
    Scars that mark their intentions.
    Lumps fester and boil
    Eyes filled with benediction.
    Hoping for a soul to stumble and fall,
    An innocent being yet to maul.
    Erode away their character,
    Robbing them of themselves
    To delight in the torment,
    blood-thirsty for the kill.
    When the blood bath is over,
    Still they are not satisfied.
    Insatiable spirits,
    In your pain they delight
    Not all that encounter these,
    Can avoid the fate nor escape it’s
    happenings.
    In such disguises it can be found.
    Never will you know what it is that deadens your mind.
    Senses aware, yet remains unseen.
    The pit and its evil, sucking all into its misdeeds.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and through heaven & earth
    the love deem the shadow of hell
    in the pits of destruction
    through prayer we manifest glory
    to tame the devil temperment of
    souls .

    this was deep it takes me back to
    my created collection of underworld
    nice drop .....................................
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The hellish consequence you've described here is frightening beyond belief. your descriptive powers are awesome.
     
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    This is a master peace continue to teach, your language is powerful and descriptive. I love your work. :welldone:
     
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    Your sinister phrasing describes oh so well what evil does and how it lives. This was superb poet.
     
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