Black Poetry : The Perverse Here-After(edited version)

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  1. Kwegan

    Kwegan Member MEMBER

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    I took Perverse and threw it out my window
    and threw it out my window
    and threw it out I did.

    But, who should I ask, was standing out my window
    should be standing under my window
    when i did what I did?

    Blind love, was standing under my window
    smoking under my window
    and caught Perverse.

    Blind love and I, together linked
    by what I did, Blind Love and Perverse
    married and birthed Disease.

    I took Disease and threw it out my window
    and threw it out my window
    and threw it out I did.

    But, who I ask, should be passing my window
    happened to pass by window
    when i did what i did?

    Gusty Wind strolled by my window
    stopped by my window
    and multipled Disease.

    Gusty Wind and I, together linked
    by what I did, Gusty Wind increased
    and whirled into Hate.

    I took Hate and threw it out my window
    and threw it out my window
    and threw it out I did.

    But, who, would you say was peeping into my window
    spying in through my window
    when I did what I did?

    Innocence was nosing around my window
    looking through my window
    and stole all my Hate.

    Innocence and I, together linked
    by what I did, Innocense got sexed
    and screamed Perverse.

    I took Perverse and Ate it...

    and Swallowed it...

    and Loved it...

    Perverse and I, Forever Linked
    By who who are, Perverse took me
    and I Love him.
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  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Perverse though it may be, I like it!
     
  3. Bluewater

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    hi :wave: Welcome to the family
    of love and embrace
    this is a fantastic flow
    very nice
    flow on
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love this piece it expressed self well
    welcome to the family of
    destee.com poetic playground
    continue to flow sho love as we go
    tyte
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome...likes this flow
     
  6. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    oh ish...
    i really like the way ya mental was work'n with this
    i had a good time following this
    flo
    please do
    drop sum mo
    one love
    khasm
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed reading this drop, the creativity of it all...Let's hear more.
     
  8. Kwegan

    Kwegan Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the welcome and love.
     
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