Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Jan 23, 2002.
the is still perfect as is your flow!!!!
this was tight!!!!
very detailed, thoroughly written
descriptive, vivid, and well put together
oh, yeah...i remember this one, sweet sunshyne. i am glad that you brought this one out. it is still as tyght as the first tyme i read it, dear friend.
GeeQue. thanks!... for the comps... & all the kisses
PD. i rememba when i 1st posted this... & you had me
crackin' up ova that "cinnamon scented breath" thing!
thanks for your response... i appreciate cha!!
KL. thanks for bein' you chile!! now if the person
who requested that i post this would get ova heah... we
can put the kiss away... 'til next time! (LOL)
more of a perfect thing huh
is not a bad thing
Soja. you are so funny! i swear!! sooo...
we're buddies, now? i thought i was your sweetie?
thanks for the read darlin'.
You had some serious lips & tongue service goin on there for a minute. The perfect kiss can do so much. I enjoyed this.
Poetically Turn'd Out!
You sure can paint a picture! I'm hot off a kiss
This had the same effect on me as it did the first time around...
So after I finished pulsating from the electric shock I got from kissing the screen I decided to let you know I still love it! lol
Thank you for givin me anutha peek into this...
Wait... I didn't insult you yet...
Holla at cha bwoy
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